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醫(yī)藥論文英文摘要中的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤與評(píng)改
醫(yī)藥論文英文摘要中的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤與評(píng)改[關(guān)鍵詞] 醫(yī)藥 論文 英文摘要
健康網(wǎng)訊: 1、醫(yī)藥科技工作者撰寫醫(yī)藥論文時(shí)一般要求附英文摘要，英文摘要寫得準(zhǔn)確與否，很大程度上體現(xiàn)了作者的學(xué)術(shù)水平，也與論文的影響力有很大關(guān)系。我們有幸從《醫(yī)藥導(dǎo)報(bào)》雜志社獲取了相當(dāng)數(shù)量論文的英文摘要原稿。該刊特邀英文校譯——同華中科技大學(xué)同濟(jì)醫(yī)學(xué)院馮新為教授，年逾九旬仍伏案筆耕，為這些稿件做了大量細(xì)致深入的校譯工作，可謂句句汗水字字珠璣。給醫(yī)藥科技論文英文摘要的寫作提供了一個(gè)范本，對(duì)廣大醫(yī)藥科技工作者來(lái)說(shuō)也是一次極其珍貴的學(xué)習(xí)機(jī)會(huì)。本刊特輯錄刊載其原文及馮教授所作修正、點(diǎn)評(píng)，以饗讀者。 2、編制體例：本文按照原文、修正、點(diǎn)評(píng)次序編寫；修改、插入處以黑體斜體，刪節(jié)處附括號(hào)說(shuō)明，如有點(diǎn)評(píng)附上標(biāo)數(shù)字注明。1、 原文：Determination of Gallic Acid in Zhixueting Liquids by TLC ScanningZHOU Qun1, XU La-ying2 (1. Department of Pharmacology, Tongji Medical College, Huazhong University of Science and Technology, Wuhan 430030, China; 2.The Faculty of Pharmacy, Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Medicine, Wuhan 430061,China)ABSTRACT Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Zhixueting liquids. Methods: Zhixueting liquids were dissolved by distilled water, and then extracted into the sample with butanal etc. The samples were determinated by TLC scanning (λS=280nm,λR=350nm). Result: The average recovery rate was 96.36% and RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid in 3 five batches of samples were 0.38,0.42 and 0.47mg/ml. Conclusion: The method is simple, convenient and available.KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Zhixueting liquids; Determination; Gallic acid修正：Determination of Gallic Acid in Chuxueting1 oral Liquids by TLC ScanningZHOU Qun1, XU La-ying2 (1. School of Pharmacy2, Tongji Medical College, Huazhong University of Science and Technology, Wuhan 430030, China; 2.The Faculty of Pharmacy, Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Medicine, Wuhan 430061,China)Abstract Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Chuxueting oral Liquids. Methods: The Chuxueting oral Liquid was dissolved in distilled water, and then extracted （into the sample刪去） with water-saturaled n-butanol3 etc. for the preparation of samples. The samples were subjected to gallic acid determination by TLC scanning (λS=280nm,λR=350nm). Results: The average rate of recovery was 96.36%,（and刪去） RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid in 3 （five刪去） batches of samples were 0.38,0.42 and 0.47mg/ml respectively. Conclusion: The method is simple, convenient and feasible.KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Chuxueting oral Liquids; Determination; Gallic acid點(diǎn)評(píng)：1、zhixueting 應(yīng)為“止血停”而非“出血�！保韵嗝�。“出血�！币部勺g為hemorrhage-stopping，以方便國(guó)外讀者理解。2、school可作“（大學(xué)里的）院”解，原意是“藥學(xué)院”，而非“藥理教研室”，故改之。3、斜體n表示“正”。2、原文：Content Determination of Emodin in Qingre Mingmu CapsulesLUO Ming-zhu1, ZHANG Hong2 (1.Hubei Provice Institute of Drug Control, Wuhan 430030, China; 2.The 75310 Medical Team of the Army)ABSTRACT Objectives: To determination content of Emodin in Qingre Mingmu Capsules. Methods: Tlcs was used, silica gel Tlc plate, developing solvent was Benzene-Ethyl fermate-formic acid-Methanol-water(3:1:0.05:0.1:0.5) of which the upper solutionλS=435nm,λR=530nm. Result: The linear relationship of sample application which ranged between 0.168-3.09μg was good. The regression equation was below: Y=105417.7X-1115.6, r=0.9995; arerage recovery was 100.53%, RSD=3.38%. Conclusion: This method is simple, accurate and convenient.KEY WORDS TLcs; Qingre ming mu Ccapsules; Emodin修正：Determination of Emodin Content in Qingremingmu1 CapsulesLUO Ming-zhu1, ZHANG Hong2 (1.Hubei Provicial Institute of Drug Control, Wuhan 430030, China; 2.The 75310 Medical Team of the Army)ABSTRACT Objective: To set up a method for the determination （content刪去） of Emodin content in Qingre Mingmu Capsules. Methods: In the TLC assay, a 0.5% canboxymethyl cellulose sodium (was used刪去) silica gel G plate and a developing solvent with a mixture of benzene—ethyl formate—formic acid—methanol—water(3:1:0.05:0.1:0.5) as the upper solution were used.λS=435nm,λR=530nm. Results: A good linear relationship was found when the sample amount (which刪去) ranged between 0.168-3.09μg （was good刪去）. The regression equation was as follows: Y=105417.7X-1115.6, r=0.9995.The average rate of recovery was 100.53%, RSD=3.38%. Conclusion: The method is simple, convenient and accurate.KEY WORDS TLC; Qingre Mingmu Ccapsules; Emodin點(diǎn)評(píng)：1、中成藥名用斜體書寫，也可譯作removing pathogenic heat to improve acuity of vision。3、原文：Research on The Acute Toxicity of Huning CapsuleXIN Zhi-wei, ZANG Zhi-he, MAI Xiao-xia, FENG Jun, YANG Wan-qing, LIAO Hong-li (Teaching and Research Section of Pharmacy, The Third Medical University, Chengdu College of PLA 610081, China)ABSTRACT Objective: To observe and test the acute toxicity of Huning Capsule on Kunming mice after an i.g. Methods: Count the death cases of mice in 7 days after the i.g. and work out the LD50 of Huning Capsule. Results: The LD50 of Huning Capsule on mice is 3981mg/kg.KEY WORDS Huning Capsule; Acute Toxicity; LD50修正：An Experimental Study of the Acute Toxicity of Huning Capsules1XIN Zhi-wei, ZANG Zhi-he, MAI Xiao-xia, FENG Jun, YANG Wan-qing, LIAO Hong-li (Teaching and Research Section of Pharmacy, Chengdu Military Medical College, The Third Military Medical University, Chengdu 610081, China)ABSTRACT Objective: To observe and determine the acute toxicity of Huning capsules (on Kunming mice刪去) after a single intragastric administration in the mouse. Methods: 50 Kunming mice were randomly divided into 5 equal groups, with 10 animals in each group. A single dose of 7500, 5630, 4200, 3150 and 2360mg/kg-1 of the content of the capsules were administened through a gastric tube to each of the mice of the 5 groups, respectively. The numbers of the deaths of the mice within 7 days were noted down and the mediar lether dose (LD50) of Huning Capsules was calculated. (Count the death cases of mice in 7 days after the i.g. and work out the LD50 of Huning Capsule. 刪去) Results: The LD50 of Huning Capsule in mice was 3981mg/kg. Conclusion: Huning Capsules have only a minor acute toxicity. It is therefore safe to use the drug clinically. Further study of its toxicity in long-term application is required.KEY WORDS Huning Capsules; Toxicity, acute; LD50點(diǎn)評(píng)：1、“呼寧膠囊”也可譯作antitussive and antiasthmatic capsules.
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